Next, imagine standing on a hot sidewalk baking in the heat and hating it. Why are you there? Describe your experience and what goes through your mind.
FOR NEXT WEEK:
Homework: read Rick Moody, Boys, pp 198-202. Think about pacing in relation to your last reading (immediately before) on energy and troubleshooting it.
Homework: write a second scene of your “heat sidewalk” piece in which something unexpected happens to the protagonist, radically changing his or her worldview.
1.Jackie, Eric, (Clara); Rock: Danielle, Vanessa (Esperanza); Blue: Cindy, Andrew (Philip); Baloney: Maria, Albert (Josh); Sun: Edward, Stephan (Rachel)